The big bike race
Once upon a time i was doing bike racing on my
bmx i
went up in the air from the jump i saw a big big mud
pud
dle it looked like it was a chocolate puddle i slowly
went
in the puddle when i jumped in on my bmx i saw the
finish
line i pushed my bmx out from the puddle i zoomed to
the
front of the race i was the winner! The end.
bmx i
went up in the air from the jump i saw a big big mud
pud
dle it looked like it was a chocolate puddle i slowly
went
in the puddle when i jumped in on my bmx i saw the
finish
line i pushed my bmx out from the puddle i zoomed to
the
front of the race i was the winner! The end.
moment in time writing.
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